Write Stronger Character-Driven Stories

Every great short film begins with a strong idea. But compelling characters, meaningful conflict, layered subtext, and cinematic storytelling are what bring that idea to life.

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My Short Screenplay Consultation is designed for writers who want honest, constructive feedback on their material and a clearer direction for their next draft.

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Submit up to 10 pages of your short screenplay and receive a focused critique designed to identify what's working, what needs improvement, and how to make your story more compelling on the page.

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What's Included:

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• Screenplay Critique: Professional feedback on up to 8 pages of your submitted material.

• Actionable Revision Suggestions: Practical recommendations for strengthening character development, dialogue, conflict, pacing, subtext, and cinematic storytelling.

• Complimentary Logline: A professionally crafted logline based on your submitted material.

• One-Hour Phone Consultation: A personal conversation to discuss your screenplay, explore creative opportunities, and answer your questions.

• Email Follow-Up: Written follow-up to reinforce key takeaways and help guide your next steps.

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Who Is This For?

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This consultation is ideal for emerging screenwriters, independent filmmakers, and storytellers developing a short film who want an experienced creative perspective before moving forward with their next draft.

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Your Investment: $97

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Bring your pages, your questions, and your creative ambitions. Let's identify the opportunities in your story and develop a stronger, more cinematic screenplay.

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